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©2009 ~RavenDrakil
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I said I was going to upload it the weekend but I finished it today so I thought on letting you see it. I can't believe how many ideas I got while making the last TR chapter I hope I got more after the next one.

BACK-STORY
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The two friends were stuck in their clash. The building were they had been before was totally destroyed, hollows that had came following the colision of the two powers were there looking the fight in the front lines.

Raven could hardly keep up with Halibel, she was fast, strong and her water based attacks were amazingly effective. He was putting everything he got.

And Halibel, even she was keeping the upper hand, was really worried about the fight, something strange had been happening during all of it. She was totally sure that some of the destroyed building had tried to crush against her during all the fight, a lot of the hollows that had came attracted by their energies got in her way and even attacked her, she was sure that even her own body betrayed her during little amounts of time during the battle. Not only that, Raven wasn't too strong for her and his speed could be managed by her, but he always knew where to strike, he attacked a lot less than her but he always was catching her off guard.

The battle kept going untill Halibel landed a brutal strike at Raven's body, he fell on his right knee and kept his head down.

H: That has been the weirdest fight I've ever had. You really fought well.
R: ...Hum, I can't believe I will be able to use it...
H: What do you mean?

Raven stood up, he was surrounded by somekind of black light, it seemed to form two black wings on his back and a somekind of energy dress around him.
H: So you still got something hidden in your sleeve.
R: This will be my final chance.
H: Then try it!

The two of them attacked and all went white...
When Halibel opened her eyes she saw Raven on the floor at her side. He was again totally normal, without that strange power from before.
H: What the hell was that!?
R: Hehe, if I tell you you'll laugh at me.
H: What do you mean?
R:Well... I can control how to use this power, how much keep it activated, when to stop using it... I can control all of it but one thing... I can't control how to unleash it.
H: You're kidding me, don't you?
R: Nope, and even I try to comprehend it, I can't arrive to and answer. Maybe you realised something about it. What did you feel of it?
H: It was strange, it wasn't an elemental attack, it's wasn't any kind of normal energy either, it was weird...you were void at one moment and then in the other you were full of this force you had created.
R: Like creating something form nothing...
H: Yes, and I felt like if it was your will that created it.
R: Um...I suppose that someday I'll know how to control it.
H. That's not fair!
R: Um...what?
H: I want you to fight me using that power from the begining.
R: Haha, I would like it but I really don't know how... I suppose that means that the fight it's over.
H: Ouff, it was fun but a bit short...
Raven then got an idea.
R: I think we can have more fun, put in front of me.
H: Um? What have you think?
Halibel sit in front of Raven with her back looking at Raven, He the grabbed her with an accurate movement like a wrestling move. When Halibel wanted to react she was trapped by Raven's arms and legs.
H: Hey! The fight was over you said that!
R:Well, in that case this is "another" fight
H:A...another...fight? How?
R:Yeah! I'm using my tickling treatment wrestling move #1 on you.
Halibel saw how Raven's free hand came to her belly, she was waiting the intense tickles he gave her before, but this time Raven's fingers danced gently over her belly, this caused her not only a very gentle tickling feeling that was driving her crazy, it was causing her very pleasant sensations.
H: Oooh God... hihihi pleaseehehe don't tickle me like that
R:Why not?
H: Becauseehehe this tickling is toohohoho..oooum, too pleehehesant...
R: You want me to stop?
H: Hehe...Please...keep doing it.
Raven kept tickling Halibel this way, litlle giggles where getting out of her mouth between some squeals produced for some pinching in her belly that Raven made when she wasn't expecting it, like everytime she closed her eyes.
While he kept his fingers dancing around Halibel's belly he begin to talk again.
R: Have you ever thought on leaving Aizen's army.
H: Why would I?
R: It's just... I don't know what he is planning, but... I think that, for him, all of you are only pawns on his chess board. He doesn't care about any one of you, and he will send you to death to get what he wants without any doubt. The first three espadas, all of you look diferent from the other hollows, I don't think that you really want to be weapons for a crazy shinigami.
H: Hum hum ... this worrying it's too kind from you.
R: So?
H: Sorry.
R: Why?
H: I choosed this life and I won't leave it. It's my will and I want to get til the end of it, if I have to die in this path, that's what I'll do.
R: I can take profit of this situation to make you change your mind.
H: You can't do that. It would be so unfair!
R: Hahaha, yes, you are right.
H: You really were going to do that?
R: Of course not! But I still think that you should leave Aizen behind before it's too late.
H: Hum hum, thanks for worrying about me.

While Raven kept tickling Halibel she asked Raven the next:
H: Raveehehe I have threehehe partneeheheers that would enjoy some fuuuunn. Whaahahaha do you thiiihihihink about iihihiiit?
R: Three partners? Um... if you help me to gave them the treatment I can take care of it.
H: Niceee for meehehehe.
R: Ok, when I have it ready I'll tell you.
H: Okeeehehehahahaaaha.
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You can see here some of Raven powers. I think they need to be explained yet but I will explain them in coming pictures.

NOTE: I think I'm made the first tickling picture of Halibel and I think I made the first one of her getting it in her resurrected form. If I am wrong don't doubt to tell me.

What do you think about the story?
Let me know what you think and I hope you like it.

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:icondanielwickie:
Who knew Halibel would enjoy tickling? :)

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:iconohstalon06:
Nice work on this...have you thought of doing Rangiku from Bleach by any chance? I think that would be cool to see.

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see, there is more fun to a human than eating them LOL

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:iconravendrakil:
I discovered it, hehe.
If you seen the previous pictures of this set she began to enjoy it in the second group of pictures, when she revealed her mask.

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There is no death, there's only a Raven taking the life.
:iconravendrakil:
Thanks Ohstalon!
Um, I haven't thought on her too much, but it's not a bad idea.
You know? I think that someone of your list in the TT group will visit my art soon.

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There is no death, there's only a Raven taking the life.
:iconravendrakil:
I don't know why but something tells me that the highest espadas are not eating humans as much as the other hollows, something like the most powerful spirits in Yu-Yu-hakusho.

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There is no death, there's only a Raven taking the life.
:iconmatch25:
Yammy practically ate the town when he first arrived

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Before you Ban me please tell me why? 99% of what i say i am joking so i have no idea why.
:icongreenjack21:
Hehehe, how so adorable! Awesome job! ^_^
It's a shame I don't know the series she's from, or I'd probably get an even bigger kick out of it. >.<
:iconkusuguruketsu777:
I can't wait for the next part. Sounds promising :3

Keep up the geat wokr \(^_^)

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